I'm now more invested in the tale of the hero(ine) now and I'm liking the direction. I'll keep following the story because it's got good hooks within it. I will say one slight thing. I found some of the flowery text hard to read. Story itself is wonderful regardless.
The Barbies do good work. I wonder how much longer Maddy can hold out, especially since I'm not sure Cassie is on his side
Heh, of course this sets the bar for Maddy - once she finally succumbs you know she's going to be the most outrageous bimbo of all! (Especially considering how dynamite she looks with a really big bust.)