Sunday, June 30, 2013

It Could Have Been Me...

Matty gets a little visualization of what might of happened to him if he had chosen to join the Barbies. Hope you like it!


  1. I'm now more invested in the tale of the hero(ine) now and I'm liking the direction. I'll keep following the story because it's got good hooks within it.

    I will say one slight thing. I found some of the flowery text hard to read. Story itself is wonderful regardless.

  2. The Barbies do good work. I wonder how much longer Maddy can hold out, especially since I'm not sure Cassie is on his side

  3. Heh, of course this sets the bar for Maddy - once she finally succumbs you know she's going to be the most outrageous bimbo of all! (Especially considering how dynamite she looks with a really big bust.)